The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

Essay topics:

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans illustrate the southwest of an airport at the moment and a scheme of it after development in the upcoming year.

Overall, the area will be expand with gates at the outer part and some facilities inside of the airport.However some parts' location will be remain the same.

One of the most significant changes that going to take place in in the northpart of the area, which is conversation of walkway part to Skytrain feature alongside the expandation of one more beach of gates(10 more gates).

Besides. Bag drop and a Cafe will be construct in the west side of the interior area. likewise in the east side, a car hire section will construct and its area will be added. furthermore, a cafe and an ATM machine will be stand in that part. In addition, it is noticeable that future departures and arrivals gates planed to build in the north part of the airport.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...d some facilities inside of the airport.However some parts location will be remain the ...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...d some facilities inside of the airport.However some parts location will be remain the ...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parts'' or 'part's'?
Suggestion: parts'; part's
...ties inside of the airport.However some parts location will be remain the same. On...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...ficant changes that going to take place in in the northpart of the area, which is con...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Likewise
... in the west side of the interior area. likewise in the east side, a car hire section wi...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: likewise,
... in the west side of the interior area. likewise in the east side, a car hire section wi...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...l construct and its area will be added. furthermore, a cafe and an ATM machine will be stan...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATM'.
Suggestion: ATM
...ll be added. furthermore, a cafe and an ATM machine will be stand in that part. In additio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66451612903 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66901908034 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9502037685 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157558840846 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834791795251 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071127940974 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107436633835 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869495762772 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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