potatoes

Essay topics:

potatoes

The table chart illustrate the number of potatoes is produced and consumed in 5 areas, namely Africa, North America, Europe, Asia, South and Central America in 2006.
It can be seen clearly that European bought the highest number of potatoes and African bought lowest. In the second table, Asia is the place where made most potatoes; meanwhile, South and Central America have the amount of potatoes to be made lowest.
Above 96 kg per person is the consumption of potatoes in Europe, 38 kg more than in North America and sixth as much as in Africa, about 14 kg per person. In the second table, Asia produced 131.2 million tonnes in 2006. It was the highest number in 5 areas, 5 million tonnes more than Europe, at 126.3 million tonnes. In the contrast, South and Central America have the lowest number of potatoes to be made, about 15,6 million tonnes.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (America) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s; meanwhile, South and Central America have the amount of potatoes to be made lowes...
^^^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (America) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...the contrast, South and Central America have the lowest number of potatoes to be mad...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25535412346 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486666666667 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6743104409 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23028394832 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119452072587 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784280753616 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179282082671 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369255736507 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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