In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting unit studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
The question raises an issue that is the youngsters want to have a gap year before they step up to the new academic environment. In my opinion, the benefits from this is outweigh compared with the drawbacks which I will clarify in this essay with the most relevant examples.
First of all, after the stressful exams, the students need a vacation to refresh their minds. Moreover , in this time, they have a trial chance to explore the new things and expand their knowledge besides the socialism at school. In other words, young people can enhance their soft skills which they were not taught by the teachers. As a result, they will become acumen in coping with the practical problems. For example, a student who spent a year between high school and university on working or traveling can deal with their difficulties better than the one who directly study in university. Due to the fact that thanking to the things adolescents experienced in the gap year, they grow up, they can stand on their own and independent of finance.
On the other hand, there is a big disadvantage of gap year that students usually drop their studies. The main reason for this trouble is that the students will focus on earning money and making a decision to give up the unit studies. Furthermore, the young people may put themselves on the risk situation when they try to visit the strange place where is far from home.
To summarize, youngsters can get many advantages of gap year that is pretty awesome experiences for youth but they need to be wise in this adventure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: outweighed
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Suggestion: ,
...acation to refresh their minds. Moreover , in this time, they have a trial chance ...
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Suggestion:
...n their own and independent of finance. On the other hand, there is a big disadv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74169741697 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53154567563 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 106.607317073 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.243589041 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 5.23603664747 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211637060474 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701716483679 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650790368858 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119649146434 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046528940637 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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