Some people believe that children’s success in adulthood is related to the way they have been raised by their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples.
Certain individuals opine that upbringing plays a key role in the success during the adolescent stage of children. I completely agree with this belief because in the early childhood days, supervision on children and development of health habits is a very important practice by the parents and the teaching of personal qualities.
Teaching child since childhood about balance between playing games and studies help in cultivating the healthy habits. In a foreseeable future, it may be highly likely that these children grows to be an individual who will be very focused in life as well as studies. For instance, It is commonly observed in the Indian culture that children who have been following the strict schedule are also doing well in their academics. As per the latest study by the “Indian Institute of management, it is collaborated that the foundation of a child is the integral parts of child’s success which can be built by their parents in yesteryears.
Furthermore, having the personal traits like dedication, honesty and loyalty can be inherited as well as taught by parents. If children do not follow these qualities, they may be chances that they may not create true relations in their life. This will have negative impact on children’s psychology. For example, as per the study conducted by “Child psychology center in India” in 2010, children who are raised by teaching about the values are likely to lead a healthy life style in their adulthood because they have better productivity and efficiency in their professions.
To sum up, it is highly recommended to keep a vigil on your child and to develop the healthy habits as well as personal qualities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16606498195 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95646490722 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552346570397 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1258637873 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.090909091 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220069278514 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832930773219 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580995994667 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117281393248 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836238968854 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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