the table below gives information about consumer spending on differnt items in five different countries in 2002.

Essay topics:

the table below gives information about consumer spending on differnt items in five different countries in 2002.

The below chart illustrates the information on different items like foods/drinks/tobacco, clothin/footware and on education/leisure among five countries.

Overall, the maximum proportion of consumers spend lavishly on tobacco while Spain spends the least income on leisure/education. Besides this, in the clothing sector Italian consumers are spending considerably on Clothing/Footwear

The consumption of Tobacco is found to at peak at 32.14%, followed by 28.91% in Ireland. Furthermore, these countries consumers are spending approximately 7% on clothing/footwear. While the tobacco consumption is significantly low among these countries like Sweden (15.77%), Italy (16.36%) and Spain (18.80%).

The items like clothing/Footwear dominates the Italian market as consumer spending is at peak of 9.00%, the least spending is by Sweden at 5.40%. These countries consumers are almost spending between 3.20% and 3.22% on leisure and education. On the other hand, the consumers in Ireland are spending the least money on leisure/education while the maximum in this market is by turkey at 4.35%

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03184713376 4.92477711251 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85955728043 2.65546596893 145% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5584774664 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.375 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236325427185 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12010346545 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557747249431 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152555837077 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043511148821 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.69 11.4140731707 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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