Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken account when deciding on the punishment.
Fixed punishments have been a common issue since the crimes spread in 20th century. Lots of crimes may occur with many of reasons. Some reasons may be tolerated and few of them can’t be tolerated because it sometimes happen when someone under particular circumstances or there is motivation for committing crime. Yet we have to know that there are some crimes which never can be tolerated with anything else because they make disaster or lots of victims such as “genocide”, terrorism and invasion to defeat country or community.
This issue has been debated by numbers of governments in the world. Yet there is no proper solution for this issue to be solved. For example, the issue about terrorism in Afghanistan and Iraq which fill today’s period there is no clue to solve terrorism there, otherwise lots of countries which want to help the issue instead they make the situation then even worse. Why this issue occurs nowadays because in the yesteryear it has happened and no one even care about it instead of taking advantages on them, so that the one which ever has this issue feels that they need to take revenge for what have happened to them. So, that’s right if punishments have to input the idea of particular circumstances or motivation for committing crime because it happened not only someone faults but also others.
However, we have to recognize that this crime whether makes disaster or lots of victims or not, so that we can decide to take fixed punishments to them who make this crime because the life of victims must be paid by fixed punishments. And the international court also has to justify the issue considering particular circumstances and other motivation which conduct with the crime.
Overall, both of fixed punishments and other particular circumstances need to solve the crime instead of choosing only one of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...pos;t be tolerated because it sometimes happen when someone under particular circumsta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 965.302439024 162% => OK
No of words: 312.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00320512821 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84134027868 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480769230769 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 283.868780488 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1305434746 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237261343673 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105698205075 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719144859683 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163753282144 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484382587707 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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