Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
How to shop for vegetables has become a hot topic among different demographics of the society. Although shopping food online is becoming increasingly popular, many people still believe that visiting supermarket is a better way of conducting grocery shopping. This essay will discuss why shopping vegetable online is appealing to more and more people, while traditional shopping is ultimately more superior.
Online shopping is certainly more efficient and more convenient to those who work long hours. One can easily go through series of images online in a short amount of time and have what they want to be delivered to his doorstep after a tiresome day. According to a recent study, most of the supermarkets in China have started to provide delivery service based on the feedback and suggestions of their customers. It's safe to say that online shopping is in high demand due to the fact that it is less time-consuming.
However, when it comes to choosing one's way of shopping, there are other factors needed to be taken into consideration. In fact, shopping in supermarkets is a more reliable approach. Smelling the raw vegetables and feeling the organic shapes allow the shoppers to properly examine the goods. For example, shoppers are able to distinguish the degree of ripeness from a tomato by simply gently squeezing it, which online shopping most definitely cannot accomplish. Therefore, shopping vegetables in supermarkets is a better way to ensure shoppers to select more suitable food for their needs.
In conclusion, traditional shopping has been challenged by the introduction of online shopping. This essay discussed people these days are leaning towards shopping vegetables online because of its effectiveness and convenience, but the more responsible way is to shop in supermarkets instead. Thus, in my opinion, shopping vegetables in supermarkets is absolutely a more superior way than online shopping.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...g. However, when it comes to choosing ones way of shopping, there are other factor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33223684211 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0221492342 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5024881757 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201885072962 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765646060549 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524602326871 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137268848368 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499217989784 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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