Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Online food shopping has become increasingly popular these days. While many people do their food shopping online, many still tend to prefer to shop by traditional methods like visiting the stores. This essay will discuss why online shopping has benefits but why traditional food shopping is ultimately superior.
Many people think grocery shopping is a boring job and they prefer to shop online since they feel online shopping is an efficient way to purchase. Indeed, in just one click of a button complete list of items can be delivered to one's doorstep. For instance, nowadays in India, most of the supermarkets delivering food items within 2 hours of order placement to ease people's busy life. Being able to buy online one can be hassle free from traditional visits to supermarkets in person.
On the other hand, another group of people thinks that visiting supermarkets is the best way to buy groceries. They say if we visit in per
son can pick best quality fruits and vegetables from the pile and even can shop newly launched best quality items which may not be available online. For example, items received through online may get damaged while handling or they could be age-old items. Even if online shopping is comfortable and efficient many people want to go to supermarkets to buy the best quality and fresh groceries.
With the advent of online groceries shopping traditional shopping has been facing challenges. This essay discussed why food shopping online can be time efficient but why shopping through the physical channel can be superior in choosing quality products. In my opinion, visiting a supermarket leaves me with multiple choices and best quality items than buying online.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'launched the best'.
Suggestion: launched the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08214285714 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6010962171 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546428571429 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.812199797 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294175789433 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115944927762 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926019663622 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177748678026 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108155442686 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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