Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advertisement is becoming more pervasive than ever before and it plays a critical role in promoting industries' products. While some people would argue that more people buy things thanks to advertising, others believe it is too rampant that no longer attract people's attention. Personally, I partly agree with both viewpoints and this essay will illustrate my thought..
On the one hand, it is clearly evident that the pervasiveness of commercials on both social networkings and real life disturbs people. Advertising is seen on road, on public transports, on buildings, on televisions, or on social platforms like youtube, Facebook, Twitter... It seems to be seen everywhere and sometimes be unnecessary interruptions, especially on social media, that we can avoid. For example, when working online, some random advertisements, such as shopping, pop up on the screen and distract people from their concentration, lead to the unproductivity of work. Thus, people try to ignore their appearance and continue doing that they are supposed to do.
On the other hand, though the common of advertisements sometimes brings inconvenience in our daily life, we can not discard their immense benefits. It is a sheer fact that commercials and advertisements help people in their shoppings by providing necessary information about the products. Hence, they are useful in saving people time and energy finding things they need. With advertisement, more people can get to know more about the information of the product and buy it if they meet their criteria. Moreover, some can buy products out of their curiosity if they are promoted in an interesting way.
In a nutshell, advertising is like a coin with two sides. Despite being reaf and disturbing, it also support people in some particular ways.
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...of their curiosity if they are promoted in an interesting way. In a nutshell, advertising is like ...
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...pite being reaf and disturbing, it also support people in some particular ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 965.302439024 157% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32394366197 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1290199298 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 106.607317073 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 283.868780488 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3725535326 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249872604778 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774036977642 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588556634277 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153240013219 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506267024161 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 40.7170731707 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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