some young people look forward to a year of traveling, a gap year, before they begin work or university and see a chance to broaden their horizons. for others this is an expensive waste of time. discuss both views and give your opinion.
End of highschool years could be scary for many people. It marks the start of a new era in life, Beginning the journey of adulthood. Some important decisions need to be made that can direct a person's path in life. Such as what job they want to have or which major they should study in which will also effect their future job.
Some people believe that this important choices shouldn't be rushed or recent highschool graduates are not experienced enough to make these choices that could alter their lives forever. So, travelling around the world, visiting different places and meeting new people with diverse culture and life style can give them the experience they need for starting their adulthood, plus some sense of independence. IT could also give them sometime to get to know themselves and their likes and dislikes.
There are also other group of young people who can not wait to start their grown up days. the may have already planed for their future and know what they want from life, chose they future working field or the study subject that interests them. For them the idea of postponing their plans for a year could be a horrible waste of time. Waiting for yet another year for chasing their dreams may seem like torture.
personally, I BELIEVE THAT it depends on the person. If someone thinks that he or she is not ready for that decision and needs more time and adventure it is good to give them the opportunity. But if someone has already made up his or her mind there is no reason for a delay.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...sions need to be made that can direct a persons path in life. Such as what job they wan...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...or they should study in which will also effect their future job. Some people beli...
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Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich will also effect their future job. Some people believe that this important ...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...ple believe that this important choices shouldnt be rushed or recent highschool graduate...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...elves and their likes and dislikes. There are also other group of young people who can not wait ...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
... and dislikes. There are also other group of young people who can not wait to sta...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... not wait to start their grown up days. the may have already planed for their futur...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...t to start their grown up days. the may have already planed for their future and kno...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...their dreams may seem like torture. personally, I BELIEVE THAT it depends on the perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25738841787 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4924268936 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226131747071 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076929777245 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485722853304 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132519289486 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611384186878 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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