the graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The graph illustrates the average temperatures and total hours of sunshine in New York, London and Sydney through out the year.
As we can see, New York start out as the coldest but reaches the highest overall temperature (30) in July. Then it follows a downward pattern.
London is a little warmer than New York until March, from March to late November it is exceeded by New York. London peak in July and August with less than 25 centigrade.
In Sydney weather pattern differs from other two cities. Temperature in London and New York grows until midyear and decreases afterwards. Sydney on the contrary, gets colder until its lower point in July and starts to go up again.
As it is shown in the table,New York receives the most amount of sun light with 2535 hours. Sydney is less than 100 hours behind New York. But London gets significantly lower hours of light (less than a half of other cities).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...sunshine in New York, London and Sydney through out the year. As we can see, New York sta...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , New
...o up again. As it is shown in the table,New York receives the most amount of sun li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37009361629 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9784119389 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6363636364 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10878930086 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481830901115 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804049105104 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838363712505 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104682637531 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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