In the past, when student did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
These days, it is more common for students to study abroad and persue their university degree in other countries than it was before. Although, living and studying in a different environment may seem difficult and scary, it has some benefits too.
When we go to university, we need to be more independent than we were in our high school years. Many students go to another city and experience living apart from their families for the first time. Studying in a whole new country apears to be even harder for several reasons. Firstly, you get the opportunity to visit your family less frequently than when you are in the same country as them. Second, communication with others could be harder as you might not speak the their language and even if you do there is the issue with accent. Moreover, understanding new custom and synchronizing with it might be problematic. For examples, it is possible that you offend them by doing something that is normal in your own culture.
In spite of all these, there is bright side to it. If you expand your university choices from national to international, you might fine somewhere with better educational qualities. Staying away from your comfort zone and living by yourself will make you more independent and self-sufficient. Experiencing new things, getting to know divers cultures and meeting new individuals with different backgrounds will teach us valuable life lessons and skills. Furthermore it will give us insights about what people around the world are doing in our field of study.
Personally, I think human beings are not meant to get stuck in one spot and eventually die where they were born. They should go to adventures and see multiple locations in the world. what better chance to do it than studying in another part of the globe?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, apart from, for example, i think, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89768976898 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74341807483 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3593287924 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2941176471 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153780954386 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479110087548 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457390421064 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10655561365 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562283191636 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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