In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. agree or disagree?
In some countries large number of people are relying more on fast foods to consist their meals which is causing various health problems. Governments are proposing the idea of higher taxes to reduce fast food consumption.
Fast food are replacing traditional meals while lacking their usual nutrients. In some cases there might a component in them that will have negative effect on the body. Moreover, they lack the needed diversity of essential food groups. All of these is leading to health problems in different organs, specially the digestive system and obesity. So,we need to find a way to solve this problem. By increasing the related taxes, they will cost more so fewer people will buy them or at least reduce their daily uses.
Although it seems like a suitable solution, governments should consider the other consequences it follows. As there are many people who buy fast foods, many jobs are relying on this and has been extended for this reason. Consequently, if we reduce fast food consumption and raise taxes some people might lose their jobs or some work places such as restaurants or factories that produce materials used in fast food might go bankrupt. Furthermore, we need to consider the reason of this issue. Nowadays, people are busy and don't have time to cook so they look for a easier faster solution. If we remove this solution what is the replacement?
Personally, I think imposing higher taxes is a good idea but there are other problems that still would be unsolved. Maybe it is better to do it in small scales and meanwhile, find an alternative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, while, at least, i think, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89887640449 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58845126596 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5753625226 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323532501914 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914899202392 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670534043665 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192881296515 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791603741034 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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