The table below give information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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The table below give information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table indicates the data of various national consumer in 5 different countries spending money on a variety of merchandises in 2002.

Overall, al of countries spent most expenditure on food, beverage and tobacco following by clothes and shoes. The lowest expenditure was spending on leisure and education in all five countries.

Firstly, turkey culminated at 32.14% on food, beverages ,and tobacco following by 28.91% of Ireland. Italy was reached the highest expenditure that was 9% on clothing and footwear ,and 6.63% of turkey was on the second ranked. Moreover, turkey hit the peak of 4.35% on leisure and education came after by 3.22% of Sweden.

On the other hand, Sweden was reached the lowest point that was 15.77% on food, beverage ,and tobacco. Absolutely the same as the lowest point of 5.40% spended on clothing and footwear. Additionally, 1.98% was the slightly expenditure on leisure and education of Spain.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25333333333 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75290553577 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.9574256452 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118325584073 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586130491758 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105734599649 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113613881056 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137169236919 0.0819641961636 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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