The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The provided table represents the data of six cities related to their underground railway systems.

From the general perspective, it was observed that Tokyo has the highest number of passengers travelling through subterranean railway systems per year. London underground railway was the oldest of all the other cities established in 1863 and most recently was Los Angeles built in 2001.

London Underground railway was established in 1863 with approximately 400kms and carrying about 775 million passengers per annum. Though Paris which was opened in 1900, was about half of the kilometres than the London railway, it has 1000 million passengers more than London. Railway of Washington DC was launched in 1976 running about 126kms with 144 million passengers per year. Kyoto Underground railway was inaugurated in 1981, fetching around 11kms in its path and 45 million passengers travelling per year. Los Angeles subterranean railway as constructed in 2001, spreading out to 28kms of the route and 50 million passengers travelling per annum.

In summary, London stands top in the list for the longest route of the underground railway system. While, the shortest being the Kyoto. Major flow of passengers was in Tokyo and less flow was seen in Kyoto.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oute of the underground railway system. While the lowest being the Kyoto. Major flow ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3216080402 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75957646041 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3629148553 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2727272727 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193200321535 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904158978227 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669969033681 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143851769039 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555945995553 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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