The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in
Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
The table illustrates the differences in the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia over the 25 years period. The data was collected each 10 years and grouped in 5 categories base on the number of children.
In general, it is clear that during 25 years from 1981 to 2006, there was a downward trend in females aged 40-44 gave birth of from none to two kids, contrary to the upward trend in those who have three and more children. And most of mothers had two kids over that time.
In particular, the most significant increase happened in the percentage of the females aged 40-40 years without children and have one child, which nearly double rise from 8.5 % to 15.9% and 7.6% to 13.2% between 1981 to 2006 respectively. By contrast, the percentage of four and more kids were raised by mothers aged 40 – 44 years doubly decreased from 27.6% in 1981 to only 11% in 25 years later.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the mothers') or simply say ''most mothers''.
Suggestion: most of the mothers; most mothers
...e who have three and more children. And most of mothers had two kids over that time. In parti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38378449303 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2681840873 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313860824056 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16888359659 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107185908871 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235510725306 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118962055687 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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