The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown museum during the year before and year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie-charts illustrates the result of survey on satisfaction level of the visitors in Ashdown Museum before and after the year of refurbishment.
Overall, the total number of visitors after refurbishment exceeded the visitors before refurbishment of the museums which might be the result of positive impact of refurbishment.
Firstly, based on the result of before refurbishment, the majority of the visitors, 40 percent, expressed their dissatisfaction followed by 30 percent satisfied, 15 percent very satisfied, 10 percent very dissatisfied and minority, 5 percent, no response respectively with their visit to the museum.
Secondly, among the respondents after the respondents, the greatest proportion of the respondents, 40 percent, were satisfied while the minimum, 5 percent, visitors responded very dissatisfied and same is the case for no response. Similarly, 35 percent expressed very satisfied and 15 percent dissatisfied.
Refurbishment seems to have a positive impact among the visitors with 10 percent increment among the respondents expressing satisfaction. The similar impact resulting decrease in dissatisfied respondents by the most 25 percent and increase in very satisfied visitors by 20 percent after the refurbishment. The proportion of very dissatisfied visitors also decreased by 5 percent whereas the individuals with no response were static.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92039800995 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4455600937 2.65546596893 130% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47263681592 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8195698826 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.75 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204779769082 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117518319788 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806287399869 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153558828869 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821105759797 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 11.4140731707 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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