The table highlights how many visitors Ashdown Museum had during the year before and the year after its refurbishment, and the pie charts compare the visitors' satisfaction due to these changes during the same two periods.
Overall, it is clear that this refurbishment resulted in an increase in the museum’s popularity and the level of customers' satisfaction.
First of all, after the museum was refurbished, the number of visitors soared from seventy-four thousand to ninety-two thousand in a year.
Turning to the survey results, the number of people who gave positive reviews rose from 45% to 75%, among which 15% were very satisfied before the refurbishment and striking 35% after. The opposite trend happened to dissatisfied customers, whose share declined from 40% to 15%. The number of respondents who were very dissatisfied witnessed the similar tendency – there was a decrease from 10% to 5%. And only the number of surveyed who gave no response remained the same at 5%.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32075471698 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09837646379 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8684421629 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351974973556 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134431128222 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138070450665 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197865045779 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152107111594 0.0819641961636 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.