The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one twon who rode bicycles in 2011
The table illustrates the proportion of man and women in different age groups who rode bicycles in a town in 2011.
Overall, the number of women riding bike always made up a larger proportion in the total of the town population. Another interesting point is that in both female and male group the percentage of children aged between 0-9 years old reached the highest figure.
Looking at details, in 2011, nearly half of the number of boy and girl at the age from 0 to 9 rode bike. While this figure remained high at the 10-17 years old girl group at 42.2%, the percentage of male at the same age halved to just 24.6%. meanwhile, the number of man and women riding bike at over 60 years old were similar, at 13.2% and 18,5% respectively.
By contrast, there were a big gap in the percentage of people cycling between two genders at the age groups from 18 to 59 years old. The number of female using bike aged 18-39 took up 17.1% of population which was as twice as higher compared to male’s data. This figure for age group from 40-50 continued to experience a fall to 12.1% and 8% in turn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bike' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bikes'.
Suggestion: bikes
...oy and girl at the age from 0 to 9 rode bike. While this figure remained high at the...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...e at the same age halved to just 24.6%. meanwhile, the number of man and women riding bik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44059405941 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4133701447 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.8098266051 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221797466577 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106256404608 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102934258038 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173315917404 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116578452536 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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