The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

Essay topics:

The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.

The table chart provides information about opinion of city sports members about facilities, activities and opening hours of the club, the data is based on a survey and is measured in percentage.
Overall, it can be seen that the predominant proportion of people are satisfied by the city sport club and that while more than half males are very satisfied by the club facilities, women are very satisfied by Opening hours.
Females and males who are very satisfied by the opening hours accounts for 72% and 44% respectively. 25% of females responses that they satisfied by the opening hours and males comprises less by 7%. A total of 37% of males not satisfied by opening hours and approximately 12 times less women are not satisfied.
More than 60% of members in both sex think that they very satisfied by Club Facilities and the percentage decreases for three times when it comes to Satisfied. 14% of females are not satisfied by club facilities compared to 10% of males. With regards to the range of facilities, more than half males members are very satisfied compared to 35% of females. 40% of men satisfied by range of facilities and again 35% females are satisfied. A total of 5% males are not satisfied by range of activities and 6 times more women a not satisfied.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and 6 times more women a not satisfied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77375565611 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71478129294 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420814479638 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2774787822 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199652241177 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911739917486 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090062584103 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157579851873 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966674645882 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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