The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the information about the global market share of different notebooks brands for companies during the years, 2006 and 2007.
On the one hand, it should be noted that the percentage of market share is not the same for all brands in 2006. The HP company has obtained 31% of market share, which is the highest amount among all other companies. Furthermore, Dell company with 16.6% and Acer company with 11.6% of market share are the following brands with a high percentage of involving. It worth noting that the lowest amount of market share belongs to Fujitsu-Siemens with only 4.8%.
On the other hand, the information about the market share of notebooks in 2007 indicates that the rank of notebooks companies is almost the same as the previous year. In fact, the HP company has the most market share with 34% among all other companies. Also, Dell company with 20.2%, which is increased compared to last year, and Acer company with 10.7%, which is decreased compared to the previous year, are the following companies after HP with high involving. The lowest amount of association in the computer market goes to Fujitsu-Simmonds with 2.3%, which is even smaller than last year.
In general, the data of market sharing in computer market based on the 2006 and 2007 shows that there are various notebook companies with different amount of market share. The Hp company has the highest and the Fujitsu-Siemens has the lowest impact on the computer market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Dell) must be used with a third-person verb: 'companies'.
Suggestion: companies
... all other companies. Furthermore, Dell company with 16.6% and Acer company with 11.6% ...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Dell) must be used with a third-person verb: 'companies'.
Suggestion: companies
...% among all other companies. Also, Dell company with 20.2%, which is increased compared...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, in fact, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00806451613 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59527105363 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415322580645 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4276708919 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.909090909 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271118577602 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148846994319 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950645684332 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232126030593 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712960478327 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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