The table gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries.

Essay topics:

The table gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries.

The table compares the tube systems in 6 different nations in terms of ages, length, and traveler number each year. Overall, the three oldest systems are longer and serve more passengers than the newest ones.
London, Paris and Tokyo's underground railroad transportations are the oldest and the largest in the aspect of route length and capacity. Built in 1863, the system in London is the longest, with 394 km of routes, approximately doubling that of Paris's one, which was opened in 1900. However, Paris's tube carries 1191 million passengers per years, roughly more 300 million people than London's one. The number of commuters is the highest in Tokyo whose system has operated since 1927.
Regarding others, despite having nearly the same length as the underground railway in Tokyo, the one in Washington DC, which was constructed nearly half of century later, had a much lower passenger capacity, at 144 million people per year. As the second-newest system starting from 1981, Kyoto's one serves the least number of traveler, resulting from its smallest size, at 11 km in length. Built 2 decades before Kyoto's railway, that of Los Angeles is 17 km longer and transports more 5 million people.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5533437548 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1176970914 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127366636813 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541593574737 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272463737217 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918705004425 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201603736983 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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