The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts give information about the attitudes of people who visit Ashdown Museum before and after refurbishment.
It is evident that visitors' opinions about this museum become more and more positive after it was refurbished.While feeling very satisfied accounts for 35 percent, the opposite is true for one before re-decoration, at only 15 percent.
As can be seen from the pie chart, the amount of people disappointing with their visit to Ashdown is very high, standing at 40 percent. More seriously, nearly 10 percent visitors feel dissatisfied when visiting it. In addition, the number of visitors who are happy and excited with their brief trip are representatively 30% and 15%.
Nevertheless, only after a year of rebuilding, the museum receives more good comments on quality of its facilities. To be specific, there are 40% and 35% people are contented, rasing to more than 10 percent. At the same time, negative opinions experience a considerable decline by 25% and the same is true for the worst comments, standing at only 5%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
... more positive after it was refurbished.While feeling very satisfied accounts for 35 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0475100441 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2485875481 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208249672066 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901386991008 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461634958563 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129405496289 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358853603021 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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