The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade -labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade -labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables describe the prices were paid on Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in five different nations in European from 1999 to 2004.
It is clear that during 5 years, money given for farmers growing coffee witnessed a significant increase in the first four countries while bananas grown in the last two nations saw a slight decline. It is notable that UK and Switzerland paid the largest price for coffee and bananas.
In 1999, nearly 2 millions of euros were given for coffee in Denmark, standing at No.1 compared to only 0.8 millions in Sweden. Britain and Switzerland had the equal amount of money used for coffee, in turns at 1.5,1 and 3 millions. By contrast, with bananas, exactly 15 millions were poured into bananas in Switzerland, which as 15 times as much as the figure in Belgium, just only 0,6. In England, Sweden and Denmark gave the same money for farmers growing bananas with the prices of 1,1.8 and 2 millions.
By 2004, the figure for coffee in UK witnessed a sharp rise to 20 millions, the opposite was true for coffee in Sweden which was paid only 1 millions. At the same time, coffee in the last three countries went up slowly, standing at 1.7, 2 and 6 millions of euros. Nevertheless, with bananas, Switzerland still saw a moderate upward tren by 32 millions, which was much bigger than that in United Kingdom and Belgium. The year 2004 also experienced a steady downward trend to 1 and 0.9 millions for this fruit.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
... coffee and bananas. In 1999, nearly 2 millions of euros were given for coffee in Denmark,...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
... went up slowly, standing at 1.7, 2 and 6 millions of euros. Nevertheless, with bananas, Swit...
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Line 4, column 498, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ownward trend to 1 and 0.9 millions for this fruit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69019607843 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50228653605 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4766081321 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.727272727 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110277777391 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505997064411 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716231971322 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103891233588 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964036259862 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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