In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and society. Suggest solutions to this problem.
In this day and age, living in some metropolises is regarded to be prohibitively exorbitant and even unaffordable due to the dramatic upward trend in the cost of living. Though this tendency seems to makes a dire impact on a large number of residents, there do seem some efficient solutions to tackle this problem.
Colossal severe consequences are caused by the enormous cost of living and one of them is expanding the poverty amongst the community. In fact, many people, especially the breadwinners of families have to suffer from a financial burden on their shoulders when essential commodities have become too expensive to purchase. For example, Ha Noi-the capital of Vietnam, is considered as one of the posh cities where products are bought with prices which are three times higher than those in the countryside in accordance with the digital sources of reliable news. The result of this is that a massive capacity of people abandon their jobs and accommodation to come back to their hometown to get rid of drastic pressure to make a living. Moreover, this issue also extends the gap between the rich and the poor in the society. Evidently, a substantial rise in the many products and services can provide owners with a huge amount of profit, which can make them become richer and richer while the opposite is true for manual workers who not only receive low wages but also have to spend lots of money buying luxurious things.
A long-term solution to this predicament is that government should cut off the amount of tax put on some industries to deplete their prices, which can help customers have ability to afford. Actually, many vital commodities, such as food, drink, cars and services, like medical care, entertainment are enduring such a tremendous tax that the owners get no choice but have to increase the prices to avoid loss-making.
In conclusion, the slumping cost of living can partially contribute to numerous difficulties in individual’s life and in the community. However, it can be addressed through policies from the government and authority with an aim to decline to amount of tax.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...endency seems to makes a dire impact on a large number of residents, there do seem some efficient...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99150141643 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8136943665 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592067988669 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.90819358 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.833333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170988198455 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591750485364 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460672536661 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100884820619 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043179086168 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.