The tables give the information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight at the same weekend in May in 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant Mumbai India

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The tables give the information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight at the same weekend in May in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
Mumbai, India

The two tables compare the differences in the temperatures and the length of daytime, which is indicated by the sunrise and sunset time, during Friday, Saturday and Sundaybetween two cities in India and Russia, namely Mumbai and Moscow in May in 2007.
Overall, the weather in Mumbai was remarkably hotter than in Moscow. While the maximum and minimum temperatures in Mumbai were quite predictable, a wide variation of temperatures can be seen in Moscow. Moreover, the daytime in Moscow was much longer than that in India.
Regarding the table of Mumbai, the temperature range was virtually unnoticeable when the maximum temperature during the three mentioned days was 33-34oC, whereas the hottest time was recorded at 29oC. 13 hours was the length of daytime in this city where the time of sunrise and sunset to be consistent g at 6:00 to around 19:12.
Unlike Mumbai, there was a significant difference in the temperature in Moscow. Sunday was the hottest day when the temperature ranged between 17 oC and 8 oC. While the difference in temperature on Friday was minimal from 8 oC to 5oC, that on Saturday was noteworthy when temperature witnessed a decline from 13 oC maximum to only 2 oC becoming the lowest figure during the whole weekend. Moscow enjoyed 18 hours of daytime, beginning when the sun rose at 4:51 and ending at 22:04.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, regarding, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93805309735 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79051681631 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2226547339 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15593741677 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707107635205 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304562856168 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105674347563 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196154211552 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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