The chart compares different proportions of male and female who had a frequent workout schedule, categorized by their age groups in Australia in the year of 2010
Overall, Females were recorded to be more active than men at all ages, except the group of 15-24 people. It is also apparent that the percentage of 15-24 male and 45-54 female was the highest among the chart.
In terms of the chart for the 15-24 aged group, the proportion for men doing exercises regularly was 52.8% and became the highest figure for them, which was relatively higher than that of women at 47,7%. As opposed to the pattern of 25-34 people where the percentage of women dwarfed the figure for men at 48,9% and 42,2% respectively.
Moreover, while there was an insignificant disparity between the figure of women aged 35-64 years old, hovering more than half of the surveyed participants, the percentage of their sex counterpart slightly went up from 39.5% to 45.1% at the same age. Moreover, the percentage of people 65 and over in both genders was relatively the same at 47% each.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rough 3 age-groups from 39.5% to 45.1%. Moreover, the percentage of people 65 and over i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53630616835 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617142857143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0172467052 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249891115885 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116698291249 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569837900717 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16540413139 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392758846344 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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