temperatures and hours of daylight in Mumbai India and Moscow Russia

Essay topics:

temperatures and hours of daylight in Mumbai, India and Moscow, Russia.

The tables compare the temperatures and the length of daytime in two cities: Mumbai, India and Moscow, Russia. The data was recorded in the same period in May 2007.

Overall, the temperatures in Mumbai were much higher than that in Moscow. However, despite the lower temperatures, people in Moscow enjoyed more sunlight than those who lived in Mumbai.

The temperatures in Mumbai were stable with the lowest temperatures showed were the same at 29C and the highest ones were 33C or 34C depending on the day. In contrast, the temperatures in Moscow more fluctuated, ranging from 2C to 13C.

The sun rose at exact 6:00 in Mumbai and set at 19:05 or 19:15. Whereas Mumbai inhabitants only had 13 hours of daylight, Moscow dwellers had 18 hours, five more hours of sunlight a day. The sun rose at around 4:05 – 4:15 in the city of Russia and set at the same time every day at 22:00.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, well, whereas, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70700636943 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50338729509 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2401907369 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1111111111 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397437902075 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155575003847 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122517571231 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222275342827 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486025246287 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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