Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is argued that individuals gain more benefits from higher education than society as a whole, therefore the expenses of universities should be fully covered by students. In my opinion, university education equally brings about prosperity for those who pursue it as well as the community. And governments or private philanthropists should give financial support for those who are in need.
Both individuals and society benefit from higher education. From the perspective of individuals, achieving a diploma usually comes with a well-paid job as graduates have more job opportunities than those who just finish high school. This results in a higher standard of living where people with higher education are able to afford a lot of things in their lives. In terms of social advantages, professionally qualified and high-skilled workers play a vital role in the development of enterprises, which in turn, boosts the economic growth. An up-rise economy obviously has positive impacts on society as governments have more resources to deal with national problems such as ecological crisis and illiteracy.
Due to the enormous influences of university education, I consider that the cost of studying should be granted for promising students who are unable to afford tuition. Students who achieve academic results with flying colors but might have to drop out of school to support their families should be given a chance to pursue their dreams and give back to the community. In contrast, if studying cost is not a problem, students should use their budget to pay for the educational bills.
In conclusion, university education has equally impacts on individuals and society and students who cannot afford the tuition should be aided to cover the cost.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34532374101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94357377555 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7580636771 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23392261127 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968029739061 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075417901776 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162000858197 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648314685903 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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