Some people argue that we should do research into our family history. Others agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people argue that family history plays a vital role and knowledge about family ancestors is essential, whereas other people consider that it is the present and future generations that we should pay attention to. In my opinion, historic stories as well as present and future generations are important.
On the one hand, I believe that family history lays the foundation for the development of generations to come. First, the family presents the root of each member, telling stories about how their ancestors made the name for the family and thus, give a strong sense about where they come from. There are trails running in the family and their family name show the position and status. Whenever people hear the name Rothschild, for example, they know that it is a powerful name in financial markets and maybe even has influences all over the world. Second, learning about the family hierarchy is valuable in terms of avoiding past mistakes. It is said that if you do not learn about history, you are doomed to repeat it.
On the other hand, it would be deficient if we ignored the present and future generations – those who will practice family traditions. Descendants are responsible to preserve and reinforce the family name by running the family business. Moreover, the new generations are facing challenges that their parents and grandparents have never known of. This means that if present and future generations immerse in the glamorous history of the family, they might end up giving an end to the family.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both family history and the present and future generations have an equally significant role to play.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01079136691 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58258601609 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543165467626 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4146520078 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215382377941 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765865733034 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068561108563 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147228301601 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755240315905 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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