Thefts

Essay topics:

Thefts

The presented figure demonstrates the annual rate of the thefts in four European countries between 2000 and 2009.

It is obviously seen that Great Britain has experienced more numbers of burglaries, where Norway has had a few and consistent values during a large time duration.

Great Britain has seen two peaks of 20 per thousands in the years 2002 and 2006. On the other hand, the least values belong to Norway, and surprisingly, it has constantly been fixed on 5 per thousands for 6 years from 2002 to 2007.  After Norway, the second country with the lowest numbers is Spain, and its steady decreasing trend from 2005 has even resulted in the least value of 4 in 2009.

Spain has had two peaks and dips fluctuating between 6 to 8 per thousands by 2005, while Greece has seen a moderate increasing trend for this time.
Spain has the same value with Greece in 2001 which is equal to 3 per thousands. Spain and Greece have had different falling and rising trends from 2005, respectively.  The maximum number of burglaries has been done in Greece by 2009 with 13 units. However, it is still 2 per thousands fewer than the least value in Great Britain which is 15 per thousands.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...2001 which is equal to 3 per thousands. Spain and Greece have had different falling a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, still, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75119617225 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67592046849 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55023923445 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8331399843 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0394973904153 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262194245348 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693700768382 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419510792556 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839021585113 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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