Transport preferred among young people from different countries

Essay topics:

Transport preferred among young people from different countries.

The bar graph represent the transport preferred by teen age in four different countries (Great Britain, USA, Germany, France) in the percentage of 0 to 100.

Overall, It can be seen that the teenagers preferred using car rather than any other means of transport in the given four countries, However bicycle is also loved by the young in term of motorcycle.

In the bar graph the percentage of young people who preferred car is equal in Great Britain and USA with the 60%. Where as in Germany it is less by 20% and highest in France among all countries around 75. In context of motorcycle in USA only it's around 30% in other countries it is below 15%. While young people in Britain preferred using bicycle 20% more than that of motorcycle and in Germany with the 30% and more than that of motorcycle and finally in France around 15% of people love using bicycle.

Votes
Average: 5.8 (5 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: teenage
...ph represent the transport preferred by teen age in four different countries Great Brita...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
... in Great Britain and USA with the 60%. Where as in Germany it is less by 20% and highes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58709677419 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43171894427 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1155101097 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261381289973 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115338942828 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645900620532 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164453111216 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102302977842 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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