The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.
A glance at the graph reveals the comparison between the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the UK.
As an overall trend, the women engage in crime cases are much more lower than men in both the prison inmates and the criminal convictions. In stark contrast, it is obvious that men are more active in crime cases.
Observing the given data elaborately, in both gender youngsters at their early twenties are far more active by 5 and 16 percentages, respectively. However, it moderately fell after their twenties. As a consequence, men are reached its lowest point of criminal convictions at their age of 60 by 2%, while women are absolutely quit from doing crimes.
As a result of their committed crimes male prisoners conquer the considerable portion with 96%, while women make insignificant minority.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lower' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lower
...he women engage in crime cases are much more lower than men in both the prison inmates and...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are absolutely quit from doing crimes. As a result of their committed crimes ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9932885906 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85284638379 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2838709294 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338167578121 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146694625044 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176813074988 0.0843802449381 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226272990467 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188340910102 0.0819641961636 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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