Two graphs

Essay topics:

Two graphs

two demonstrated pie charts give some information about the ability of British pupils at one the England universities to speak a language other than English. these units are upon the percentage of proportion for different languages in 2000 and 2010.

An intriguing point about these charts is that the spanish language has the majority of this proportion for both years 2000 and 2010.

spanish language by the values of 30 and 35 per cent for the years 2000 and 2010 prove that most of the students have been qualified to speak spanish. A comparison between charts shows that the German only language portion has been equal in both charts by the value of 10 per cent in these two years. The second number in presented charts which is equal to 20 per cent belongs to no other language in 2000 and another language in 2010.

french language and two other languages show the values of 10 and 15 per cent in both charts with different trends. french only has had 15 per cent, while this language has experienced a decrease to 10 per cent in 2010. two other languages have risen from 10 to 15 per cent from 2000 to 2010. No other language proportion in 2010 has been half of its value in 2000 and demonstrates the unit of 10 per cent in 2010 graph.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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two demonstrated pie charts give some infor...
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...to speak a language other than English. these units are upon the percentage of propor...
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Suggestion: Spanish
...tion for both years 2000 and 2010. spanish language by the values of 30 and 35 per...
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...2000 and another language in 2010. french language and two other languages show t...
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...t in both charts with different trends. french only has had 15 per cent, while this la...
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...nced a decrease to 10 per cent in 2010. two other languages have risen from 10 to 1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58407079646 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39143225578 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429203539823 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2429038027 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0988506334795 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487258243404 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489085350136 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582863652362 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430705253859 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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