The two graphs below show the percentages of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries, for period 1960 – 2000.
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The two graphs below illustrates the smoker percentage and the alcohol consumption in litres in some particular countries between 1960 and 2002. It can be seen from the graph that the percentage of daily smokers declined significantly while the amount of alcohol per person increased sharply during this period of time.
In 1960, the percentage of smokers in holland population came top with 60% and this figure was 1.5 time higher than USA while daily smoker account for a half of japanese population. 40 years later, there were rapid falls in the smoker percentage in those countries. holland and japanese percentage of smokers dropped sharply to approximately 40 % and the number of USA is just over 20%.
By contrast, from 1960 to 2000 saw a sharp go up from 4 and 8 litres per person before dropping slightly to under 10 in holland and USA consumption. In addition, the alcohol per person of Turkey increased slightly from 1 to 2 litres.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...er person increased sharply during this period of time. In 1960, the percentage of smokers ...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Holland
...e smoker percentage in those countries. holland and japanese percentage of smokers drop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72511442615 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.21915241 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316514436539 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14127686048 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096034313178 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200299213062 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116216332906 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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