Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothees and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
people have different views about whether or not let children choose whatever they want in daily life, some people think it tend to result in a individuals society while the others believe children need to make their own decisions. This eassy will discuss both these views but personally, I argue that it will be better for children ti make their own choices.
On the one hand, allowing children decide everything in their life may harm their personality and lead to a society of individual and they will only care about themselves. Firstly, children may only think about their own wishes and ignore every advices from adults. A child will choose their favourite food or clothes which are not good for your health or not suitable for them. Moreover, they may participate in some entertainment which have bad effect on them like drugs, violence game …. if they can choose whatever they want. Another arguments is children will be selfish and do everything at their discretion. they may never consider that their choices can force their parents or someone else to the difficult situation like buy a new expensive mobile phone when their parents are not affordable or they are not deserve.
On the other hand, despite these above arguments, there are several reason to let children make their choices in their life. firstly, they can improve a skill namely “ making decision”. making decisions is a important skill which help people choose which one is the best for them in every major in modern life. Consequence, children can make the better choices faster than the others that will help them in the future. Furthermore, let children decide by their own way can make children take the responsibility to their decision. Thus, they will learn how to handle with their choices or some problems if they choose the wrong way because they can’t blame someone else about the bad decision like a goods they bought but they don’t like after pay the money or some food that they order but it is not their type. Last but not least, allowing children make their own decision will make them become more independent. make choices is the first step in order to make a child become an adults and get ready to the challenge of life later. We can clearly seen that, it is very important and useful if children can make their own choices and take the responsibility for their decisions.
In conclusion, it is necessary to let a child make choose some thing in their life and learn how to take the responsibility with their choices. parents and adult should pay attention and help them choose the most suitable decision in daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86061946903 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46533151205 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440265486726 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3855256249 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.85 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39263364877 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146051369797 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791989898318 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256876477648 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958943970424 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.