Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothees and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
There are two opinions about allowing children to make decision. On the one hand, some people believe that letting children make choice for everything makes society to selfish. On the other hand, other people think children make own decision is important to them. I agree with this opinion.
Sometimes people say the person who growing alone is selfish, because he or she would not have a situation which must abandon something for another people like sisters or brothers. This means who have been choose they wished, act like that even though they grow up. Actually, according to my mom, she is an elementary school teacher, recently, the number of children who only propose their own opinion is increasing.
Now I will say the advantage of allowing children to make choice.
First of all, children can learn responsibility by making choice. They could regret their choice, and get pleasure by their choice and these experiences would extremely helpful in their future.
Second. In my country, traditionally people have disciplined children to grow up as polite. So that, many kids have been restricted the opportunities make decisions cause of such culture. This makes people who cannot decide anything with out parents. This is big problem in our culture too. Growing child to an independent adult is important as well as gentle adult. Children must learn how to chose using by their own opinion.
In conclusion, some what, children must learn how to give up their eager for another people. However, learning responsibility, and how to live independently is more important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...s or brothers. This means who have been choose they wished, act like that even though ...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...makes people who cannot decide anything with out parents. This is big problem in our cul...
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Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to use'.
Suggestion: to use
...adult. Children must learn how to chose using by their own opinion. In conclusion,...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: SOME_WHAT_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
...by their own opinion. In conclusion, some what, children must learn how to give up the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, second, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15503875969 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66019134494 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4629018302 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8888888889 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352759932667 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112647674116 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977539400655 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186343631496 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107224147136 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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