The two maps below show an Island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The two maps compare an island before and after construction of visitor facilities. Overall, there was a noticeable change in the term of tourist accommodations and transportation access in the island after it had been constructed.
To begin with, before it was decorated, the island was completely empty of any facilities. Moreover, it was also considered as remote area due to its lack of transportation access to reach it. Subsequently, after it was being constructed, this area experienced a considerable improvement in accommodation facilities which is located in the center and nearby swimming beach of the Island. In addition, other facilities such as restaurant, sailing boats, as well as swimming beach were also built to complete the Island’s decoration. Lastly, there was also enhancement in the transportation sectors including the vehicle roads and walking-paths as well as the bridge that were constructed to connect all types of accommodation and facilities one another.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, lastly, moreover, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55263157895 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47355960702 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8404315614 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 5.23603664747 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143338941819 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854497449413 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104308968565 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163790066559 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103194776937 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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