The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant.

The given maps illustrate how to enter a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 via the city road. The maps also show the differences of the infrastructure of the hospital in 2007 and 2010.

Overall, both in 2007 and 2010 the hospital has car parking facilities, bus station and a ring road around the hospital. While in 2007 bus station is situated on the the north-east of Hospital road and 2010 bus station is placed on the west of hospital road and aligned with it.

Firstly, in 2007, both staff and public have the same location to parking their car situated just north of the City Road and east of the Hospital Road. There is connecting road between Parking location and Ring Road. The bus station is located is on the east side of the Hospital.

On the later case, in 2010, staff and public have separate parking location for car, one is placed in south and another is in east of the city Hospital respectively. Bus station is situated is just opposite of the staff car parking location divided by the Hospital Road. There is also a roundabout just east of the staff parking location. Moreover, it also contains 2 circular road connecting Bus station, City Road, Hospital road and ring road.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...hile in 2007 bus station is situated on the the north-east of Hospital road and 2010 bu...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...hile in 2007 bus station is situated on the the north-east of Hospital road and 2010 bu...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 447, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...City Road, Hospital road and ring road.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6338028169 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44370594324 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.384976525822 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6013278608 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226385146021 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121955483248 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836627147181 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189373139433 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837046158592 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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