While some people suppose that they have few choices to choose, on contrast, there are also few people who believe that there are lots of options available for them, from where they can choose their best option. In my opinion, choices are limited respected to a particular person.
First of all, living in an era which is based on technological development, although there are many possible opportunities available, very few of them are suit for an individual. For example, having vast range of job categories can not usually provide option for an employer from which he or she can choose his behooving option. An employee have to do his fixed works, assigned by his lead or boss and can be often oppressed by him. This types of leader could be act like as a balk of an employer career which could eventually lead to deleterious effects on employer independence.
Furthermore, from childhood, in every aspects of life we have to limit our choices based on our peripheral circumstances. For instance, at the age of adolescents, teenagers have to plan their future life which defined by their parents. Besides, they have to study the courses which is predefined by his teachers, leaving no scopes for their opinion. Moreover, at the time of University admission if they are unable to get admitted in their preferable subject, they have no other options without choosing the areas which is incongruous for them and for their career. However, technological development creates a lot of opportunities for new job sector, very few individual have a little scope to select their preferred option.
In conclusion, different opportunities are available for different persons, while most of these are limited to choose by a single person who can decide about very few options that are fruitful for him.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02675585284 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83548140716 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6221793382 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0810595610515 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336493432277 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281694686739 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504864056717 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337783788983 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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