water treatment

Essay topics:

water treatment

The diagram displays the process of water treatment until it is ready for domestic consumption.
Overall, there are six stages to filter the raw water, starting with coagulation, flocculation, sedimentation, filtration, disinfection, and finally the restoration of the water.
Initially, the flowing water from the raw one will be treated chemically in the coagulation-flocculation basin to enhance the ability of the further stages to remove unwanted particles. Afterward, the solid particles from the water are suspended from circular motion in this container, and the results of this are added with polymer substances before processing in the next stages.
Infiltration step, the water is strained with the specific equipment that passes only micro molecules, and after that disinfectant fluoride is given as an extra chemical to make sure the water free from germs. Then, the corrosion treatment is the last prevention given in a plumbing system that is mostly made of aluminum and copper. After that, the water will be stored in a particular reservoir before it is delivered to the home.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23544584961 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4288011018 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378778548483 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162164582692 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808067011655 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234498099325 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814379635272 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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