Dear sir,
I am writing about the decision of building a shopping mall in the center of the town.
The planning of opening a shopping mall in our town by the planning department considered as a threat for all the local shopkeepers living in the center of town. On behalf of everyone, I want to discuss the reasons for why we object towards establishing a mall in our area.
The issues behind that are a major concern over small retailers who have only one option to earn their living through selling a few items at retail prices. If the shopping mall opens in this area, all the customers go on the departmental store to purchase which make a huge loss for retailers. Secondly, the construction in the city area creates a lot of pollution and affect the health of people. Another parking in the nearest places around the shopping mall is not possible because of the narrow roads. Additionally, the disturbance happens by the people at night effect over the sleeping habits, specifically for students and children's. The discounts and offers provided in the malls attract a number of customers and by this, the price differences made a biased competition among all the local shopkeepers.
For this, the better alternative for the planning to build a mall is to shift on the other place. You can also make changes over the map of construction like give more space in the parking area, acquiring shopkeepers and provide them sufficient space for selling their products. Furthermore, the closing time of the mall should be mentioned strictly and shut down before sleeping hours.
I hope you think about the issues and about the solutions, I added here, and take sufficient actions for the society.
Thank you
Yours Sincerely
Mishika Sugandhi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94276094276 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70443109662 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0281995901 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203787001046 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070146772822 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567435238084 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107121643962 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387734468015 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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