You recently read an article in a magazine which was very useful for your work You would like to recommend it to a friend Write a letter to him her and say What was the article about Where did you read it Why is it useful for your job

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You recently read an article in a magazine, which was very useful for your work. You would like to recommend it to a friend. Write a letter to him/her and say
- What was the article about?
- Where did you read it?
- Why is it useful for your job?

Submitted by RBH on Thu, 09/10/2015 - 12:29

Dear James,
How are you? Hope you are doing good? It is almost a year now since we have met. Last time probably we had met during the party of our common friend on the occasion of his wedding.

The reason why I am writing to you now is to share the interesting facts about an article which I had read recently in our company monthly magazine. The article is about time management and effective written communication. The article is being written by one of our senior managers.

The article talks about managing time effectively between personal and professional life. Moreover, what is the effective way of writing email to a client? There are multifarious reasons why I like the article. Firstly, in our day to day work we always struggle to manage our time effectively. Thus, we all land up spending extra hours in the office than our normal working hours. Secondly, sometimes while communicating with client we are not quite sure what kind of language we should use. Therefore, we are always worried whether our email is too formal or informal in terms of a language. However, after reading this article, now I have better understanding on these 2 facts.

Hence, if you want to read more on this article. Just go through the August edition.

I am looking forward to hearing your personal views.

Regards
Michael

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Average: 8.3 (3 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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you are doing good
you are doing well

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 10
No. of Words: 232 200
No. of Characters: 1063 1000
No. of Different Words: 142 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.903 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.582 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.518 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.119 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.35 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.582 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.172 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4

Dear Sir,

Can you please let me know why the letter is out of topic, so that I can correct that.

Actually as per Letter topic I need to describe about an article that I read in a magazine. The same need to recommend to friend.

"You recently read an article in a magazine, which was very useful for your work. You would like to recommend it to a friend. Write a letter to him/her and say"

I would be grateful to you if you can explain me more

Regards

Dear Sir,

No problem. Thanks for correcting.

But can you please let me know how i make this letter and previous letter of mine of worth 7.5 bands. Any suggestion you can provide

Regards

We can always find out 'little flaws' in your essays though they are not big. for example:

You said:
It is almost a year now since we have met.

We would like:
It has been a long time since we last met.

Also you have grammatical issues to prevent you get 7.5.

The issues are mostly in the introduction paragraph. You developed the essay body very well.
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