You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words
The graphs give information about the questionnaire in regards to visitor satisfaction, which was conducted after renovating Ashdown Museum. Furthermore, the number of people who visited the museum before and after the redecoration was also provided in the given table.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that not only did visitor numbers increase dramatically after the interior reconstruction, the survey's result also indicated that the proportion of satisfied and very satisfied customers were seeing a growth while the percentage of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied customers showed otherwise.
Prior to the renovation, Ashdown Museum was visited by just under 75,000 people. Whereas this number increased noticeably after the refurbishment, reaching nearly ten thousand that year. Similarly, the proportion of satisfied customers was also seeing a growth by going up slightly from 30% to 40% after the construction. In addition, the increase of very satisfied visitors was even more significant. Before the redecoration, only 15 out of 100 people were feeling very satisfied about the museum, however, the figure doubled at 35% afterwards.
On the contrary, the proportion of negative ratings plunged while that of positive ones soared. In detail, the percentage of dissatisfied customers drastically dropped from 40% to only 15%. Furthermore, people who claimed to be very unsatisfied on the questionnaires also dipped by half, from 10% to 5%. While the visitors who showed no opinions remained steadily at 5% after the renovation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ive information about the questionnaire in regards to visitor satisfaction, which was conduct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64806866953 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13805819509 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557939914163 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.9328532307 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259711375704 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920633931679 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605627698482 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162125529878 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061233103407 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.