Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, people can purchase anything they want from any country in the world. While some believe that this development would cause the similarities of countries to increase. In my opinion, a change in human’s behavior is proof that the world is constantly making progress. Therefore, this development brings people more benefits. Furthermore, being able to go shipping online also means customers can pay less for the same product.
Firstly, a culture’s uniqueness is embodied in people’s blood, from skin color, pupil color to bone structure. These are the things that can’t be reversed. Let alone putting on an identical outfit with someone else would entirely erase the features or personality. In addition, being able to buy things worldwide is a splendid accomplishment. It requires strong technique support and human’s ability to adapt to new habits to make it possible. In addition, it requires a powerful system to implement this idea. From logistics, and website construction to online marketing, these fields contain all innovative ideas. Undoubtedly, this development is the acknowledgement of human’s milestone in history and it would be considered a positive one.
Secondly, this advancement brings people more convenience by providing customers budgeted prices and more choices. By avoiding buying through a retail store which benefits from the price difference, customers are likely to pay less for an exact same product when buying from overseas suppliers. For instance, around a decade ago, plenty of online stores in Taiwan sold clothes that were imported from Taobao, a wholesaler in China. While now consumers can directly place an order on Taobao website, the cost is greatly reduced.
Lastly, delivering goods globally brings positive feedback in different aspects. Not only could it be seen as an achievement in society, it also provides consumers better prices and even more choices worldwide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52013422819 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9173659829 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1013063281 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5789473684 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241689168302 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684393003481 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725115867883 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141516523997 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084918539627 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.