You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph gives information about the number of passengers of underground station in London depending on the specific time of the day.

Overall, the number of commuters in this station continuously fluctuates over the period. The two peak hours where passengers have the greatest number are 8 am and 6 pm while few people are travelling at 6 am and 4 pm

In details, the underground station opens early as 6 in the morning with only 100 travelers before it reaches the high of 400 commuters at 8am. By 10 am, the number of people in the station decreases significantly to less 200 which then increases in the afternoon. Beginning at 12 noon to 2 pm, the number of the passengers remains steady from 250 to 300.

To continue, the most significant drop of the commuters in the London underground station is at 4pm from 300 to 100. However, it increases markedly to less than 400 passengers at 6pm before it plummets to over 100 travelers at 8pm. Late in the evening, the recorded commuters are around 130 to 160.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66298342541 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81035772781 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8101162012 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189833661689 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885984472006 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595094470407 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135325698994 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506620185615 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.