You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to express my interest in working at our head branch in Germany for 6 months.
I am the human resource manager and there are more than two hundred German employees. Due to language barrier, it becomes difficult to handle all their needs. This some times cause dissatisfaction and they become unhappy. Although I have done a basic course in German language, I am still lacking complete control over it. If given an opportunity to work in Germany, this first-hand experience will not only help me to brush on my language skills but also I can learn about their culture. On my return, I can use all the knowledge that I learned during my six-month tenure and successfully implement here, which will assist in satisfying our German staff.
Moreover, in my absence, Ms. Jane will be looking after my work. I have trained her to carry out all duties without any difficulty. Also, I will be available online, so in case of any help, I can be easily reached.
I would like you accept my application and put a word of reference to the head office, so they are more likely to approve my request.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Bina
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[2]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ne a basic course in German language, I am still lacking complete control over it. If given an o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7380952381 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6993784453 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690476190476 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9850635599 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5384615385 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178988152048 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622917946327 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648861182679 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118609744889 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649506230956 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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