Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?
It is common for a contemporary person to experience stress. Studies point out that having a massive level of stress can make people believe that their lives are out-of-control. This leads to many difficulties; however, plausible steps are available to tackle the problem.
The major problem might be in terms of work efficiency. When a person is suffering from psychological problems ranging from depression to anxiety and overthinking to insecurity, he is more likely to be demotivated and have lower self-esteem. This might result in low-conspicuous working performance and harm productivity in the workplace. Obviously, such people are more likely to be dismissed from their jobs. Unemployment will further exacerbate their problem. Another problem reflects a concern with personal relationships. Frustrated people are prone to losing their patience, even with trivial matters. Breaking into fights with partners frequently leads to relationship breakdowns. Divorce and separation are inevitable in bitter relationships.
Turning to the viable remedies, the key is to eliminate the root cause through relaxation techniques. People can opt for methods such as yoga and meditation to regulate their emotions and try to control their outbursts. Playing sports can be another solution. Only by channelizing the excessive energy and releasing the built-up tension can people be able to find peace. It will not only help with mental health but also with physical fitness, which will be improved. Furthermore, people should attempt to go on vacation with family members. Visiting new places and discovering new cultures will change people’s views of the world, which can make them more tolerant of differences.
To conclude, there are two possible problems, namely, getting laid off and damaging relationships. Nonetheless, straightforward measures, such as adapting relaxing methodologies and holidaying, are effective to help people alleviate problematic circumstances.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80756013746 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24281387167 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642611683849 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9416256382 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4761904762 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192840998374 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536153843236 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051448209319 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117515089686 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485293570458 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80756013746 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24281387167 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642611683849 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9416256382 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4761904762 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192840998374 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536153843236 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051448209319 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117515089686 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485293570458 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.