Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is an incredibly common belief that clothes maketh a man. Some assert the possibility of knowing an individual’s culture as well as personality from the clothes they choose to wear. While some people would argue that not all judgements can be perfect, in my opinion, it is possible to arrive at some conclusion about the person’s background by looking at their attire. This essay will elucidate points to support my perspective in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, people’s clothes speak a lot about their culture since it is easy to identify which culture they belong to. For instance, Sari is a traditional women’s dress from India. When a woman wears a sari, we know she belongs to India. Secondly, a well-dressed man in a suit and tie is perceived as an erudite person. Immaculate clothes are usually a sign of a person being intelligent, smart and well-mannered. People talk with them, showing respect and politeness. Also, rich people often wear expensive branded clothes since they can afford it. Conversely, a shabby-dressed person may appear to be less educated or impolite in nature. If a person wears old, torn, or dirty clothes, they may be considered to be homeless or impoverished. Lastly, the style of clothing projects what kind of a person they may be. For instance, introverts may like to be dressed in subtle colors, whereas extroverts may prefer bright colors and a party wardrobe.
However, some people feel that one cannot be judged based on their clothes. Not all wealthy people wear exquisite labelled clothes. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg and Bill Gates. Although they can afford to buy them, they dress themselves like laymen. Another contrast idea is that people from different cultures may choose to wear clothes from another culture because of fashion. For example, an American woman may want to wear a sari to work simply because she is fond of the design. This does not mean that she is Indian. So, people may wear clothes they love, and, therefore, clothes do not reflect their true nature.
While some people have contradicting opinions due to some exceptions, from my perspective, clothes definitely define a person’s identity and potrays the culture they hail from. Various clothes from all over the world are a symbol of bio-diversity, and people’s characteristics can be seen from their clothes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'belongs'.
Suggestion: belongs
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Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...ly, the style of clothing projects what kind of a person they may be. For instance, intro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72938080175 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549872122762 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1446746768 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2916666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04166666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282078376338 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843092503572 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800465730138 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209385493668 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470972232174 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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