Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
It is common to see the popularity of cinema and video games that contain violent contents. While some think that they ought to be banned due to the negative impact on society, others assert that they are merely leisure activities. This essay with discuss both perspectives. I, however, side with the later view.
On the one hand, many reasons are given by people who feel that violent multi-media and games should be censored. Firstly, people who watch excess distress movies or virtually killing others players become pessimistic. Because of the high volume of negative materials, people develop a negative attitude towards life. They start to feel that the entire world is similar to the one projected in the movies. Thus, some even develop feeling of apathy. Secondly, exposure to violence is detrimental to children. Since children are easily influenced by what they see, they try to enact in real life. A personal example of my nephew. After seeing the WWF games, he tried to use some of the fighting moves on his younger brother and got himself injured severly. Constantly watching crime movies or fighting in computer games, children might start developing aggressive behaviour towards other people.
On the other hand, some say that movies and computer games are not harmful pastime. Few people would contest that crime and violence in socities existed even before the invention of movies and digital games. So, it is wrong to put the entire blame on them. There are other factors responsible causing destruction in society. Such as imbibing alcohol, substance abuse, and firearms possession. These as more pressing factors deleterious to communities. Although violent movies and games may influence some change in behaviour, it can be easily controlled by limited screen time. Parents should keep a tab on their children and properly guide them to follow a proper demeanor. Also, some amount of exposure to violence is essential to sensitize person to the actual events that may or may not be occuring around the world as depicted in movies.
To conclude, despite the fact that violence in movies and computer games might cast a dark effect on people, it can be curbed by reducing the time spend on viewing them. In my opinion, people should at least view some criminal contents to have a fair knowledge of the crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r seeing the WWF games, he tried to use some of the fighting moves on his younger brother a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, at least, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05440414508 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50739329346 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572538860104 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5393305598 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.04 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.44 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349423990304 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755755643679 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609160106084 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203922963564 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250575666884 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.